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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 20:50:34 GMT -5
Ugh. So evil. Anyway, I made my main character fall in love with the other and neither of them knows it and then I kill him off and spend the next page describing the death scene. I am a hopelessly heartless person, aren't I?
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 20:51:47 GMT -5
Wait. Destiny Coleman has to live with her cousin Jack Days. Amy Winters is in love with her best friends older cousin Jack Days. I want to write really awkward romance scenes in their house now.
(Sorry just talking about my own writing)
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Post by Misha on Aug 2, 2013 20:53:12 GMT -5
But sometimes you have to be heartless to make a story really good. I mean there are many heartbreaking deaths in Harry Potter but without them, it would lose part of it's greatness.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 20:55:01 GMT -5
Yeah. Being heartless in a way is good. I have a twisted way of thinking.
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 20:55:11 GMT -5
Oh wait Jack Days dies too never mind about the awkward cute romance scenes let's just kill him while Amy is present because heartbreak.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 20:55:51 GMT -5
Aww...are you writing in first person by any chance?
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 20:57:38 GMT -5
No, it's usually switched-around 2nd person, because it's mostly about a bunch of eighteen year olds, and some others characters. (Jack is around 22)
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 21:05:08 GMT -5
Oh ok that makes sense then.
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 21:10:09 GMT -5
I want to show someone my prolouge for feedback oh my god
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Post by Misha on Aug 2, 2013 21:12:17 GMT -5
What's your story about?
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 21:14:52 GMT -5
Well it's about a school (Beta School Of Magic) and follows 18 third years (they start at 16 y/o and end at 19) that's for fairies, witches, wizards and sorcerers. Some complicated stuff happens and a few people die, and there's a //little// bit of romance.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 22:01:32 GMT -5
Do it! I want to read your prologue...
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 2, 2013 22:04:26 GMT -5
You should post it here like what Ember and I are doing with Your Mortal.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 2, 2013 22:05:32 GMT -5
Yeah, that will be ok.
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Post by heathertd on Aug 2, 2013 22:09:26 GMT -5
Well I'll only post the prolouge here because every chapter is over 20 A4 pages long.
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