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Post by Evelyn on Jul 23, 2013 4:22:38 GMT -5
Read the title! Enter it with this form:
Normal Sue, not a Fandom Sue
Name:
Nickname(s):
Age:
Personality:
Appearance:
Special Powers:
Weapon:
Family:
Background:
Btw, you are allowed two entries - one male, one female.
I'll judge it with 5 categories:
How bad the name/nickname is, how amazingly talented he/she is, how many totally amazing powers she/he has, how physically attractive he/she is and how bad their 'background' is.
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Post by Misha on Jul 23, 2013 8:32:42 GMT -5
Name: Emerald Auburn Jennifer De Alexia Delight
Nicknames: Em, Emma, Alex, Jennifer, Emmy
Age: 15
Personality: Is extremely funny and smart. She's popular and can make friends instantly. She's kind and can always crack a joke. She's a teacher's pet but at the same time all her class mates love her too. She's flirty as well.
Appearance: Straight blonde long hair and emerald green eyes. She has plump pink limps and perfect skin without one pimple. Doesn't have to wear make up because she has naturally long eyelashes and her face is just perfect. She has a curvy body so she looks good in any outfit, even a bin bag. She has a slim and well built body which makes all the boys swoon. She also has wings which are as white as snow.
Special Powers: She can run at the speed of light and can also fly. She wears a locket which when opened releases an entity which can kill anyone, even the most powerful person on this planet. However only she has the power to open this locket as it only opens to her touch because she has a special DNA as she was secretly a princess from the high moons.
Weapon: The locket and a sword which can cut through pure gold.
Family: Her real family are the King and Queen of the high moons
Background: When she was a baby she was kidnapped by a couple who were abusive. Her "dad" was a rapist and he is now in prison after constantly raping Emerald (it's cool she's over it) and her "mum" is dead. She was then living on the streets when a man told her he would look after her but he made her a prost*tute. After a year of being physically and sexually abused by this man she escaped and now she lives on her own in an apartment where she has crazy parties all the time.
Note: At the moment two guys are crushing on her: George, the hottest boy in the school who dumped his girlfriend to get with Em and John, George's best friend who has liked Em since the day she came to this school.
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 24, 2013 1:28:50 GMT -5
Ok. One question, do you want me to rank it after each submission or when entries have ended?
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Post by Misha on Jul 24, 2013 1:35:29 GMT -5
I think when the entries have ended is a good idea.
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 24, 2013 2:30:35 GMT -5
Sure. That's what I was planning anyway.
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Post by Little Comet on Jul 24, 2013 12:54:31 GMT -5
Name: Bella Arabella Belinda Eaby
Nickname(s): BABE, Belle, Beauty, Hot Stuff, Ohmygoshsexiness
Age: 16
Personality: Bella is really cheerful and energetic and liek super outgoing. She is really smart and has a 5 GPA. Everyone adores her because she is so nice to everyone yet very cool and popular. Every single boy loves her. Liek, she is so perfect everyone thinks she is so cool even her, liek, family.
Appearance: Super glossy, super shiny, super perfect auburn hair that is liek super smooth and silky. She has a perfect bod liek. She wears the coolest most expensve clothes from all the cute expensive stores. Her face is clear skinned and she has perfect cheekbones, lips, nose and all dat stuffz.
Special Powers: She has a secret power no one knows about because she is so good at keeping secrets! She can make money appear in her hand so liek she can buy everything whenever she wants to. She also has seductive powers so liek she gets WHATEVER she wants! She doesn't need to use her money most of the time cuz everyone gives her everything for freeeeee. Her amazan mercedes benz was, liek, free.
Weapon: She doesn't need a weapon because she also has super strength liek she can defeat anyone with her hands it's amazin to watch!
Family: Sexy Eaby (dad) and Supersexy Eaby (mom)
Background: Her parents (Sexy and Supersexy) are the two richest people in the world, so when they married they became, liek, the SUPERHUGERICH-O-MATIC couple in, liek, the whole world including, liek, space with all them rich martians. LOLZ!!!!!111!!!!!111 Bella also has a brother who is really muscular and the quartback on the football team. He is so good, he, liek, got a one million dollarz scholarship to Oxford! Liek!
O.O
That is painful to read right there.
I think I went too far.
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 24, 2013 14:32:01 GMT -5
That must have hurt you. A lot. You know, writing the word 'liek' THAT many times...
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Post by pinkycrystal on Jul 24, 2013 16:43:24 GMT -5
Name: Jesaminriel Arielella Angeleir Sakura Raynebow Nickname(s): Her friends call her Katylinda. Age: Looks 14 but is actually older than the universe itself. Personality: Jesaminriel is very bubbly and sweet. She is also very encouraging; leik for example, she is aware that she is the prettiest and smartest girl EVER but she tries to encourage others to be what their full potential can offer. She's very persuasive so she gets everything for free and she can get out of situations without a hassle. Although she is 14(and clearly underage) she drives a Mercedes and she always gets away with it even though she has no valid drivers license. She is head cheerleader at school, the best singer in every school choir(might I just add she has the biggest voice range EVER?!11?!! Leik, she can sing leik, any note ranging from a male's Bass to a female's Soprano!!1!!111!) the best artist, the best dancer, best at jewelry making... Basically she's good at everything!! Appearance: She's got blue hair that alternates between baby blue and dark navy depending on the time of the day!! So during day time, her hair is a pale blue and has yellow and white highlights to represent the sun and clouds. There are also rainbow coloured streaks to represent rainbows and happiness. During night time, her hair is is dark navy and has silvery highlights to represent the moon. During nighttime, her hair has this mysterious glitter-like shiny stuff and they represent stars on a celestial night. For your convenience, a picture will be provided.  Her eyes are cat like(explaining her nickname), with one silvery gray to represent wisdom and when you look into them you'll all the sorrow and pain she's gone through and you will pity her. Also, you can see visions of the past or the future when you look into her silvery eye. The other eye is all the colours of the rainbow to represent happiness and it looks very dramatic and you'll instantly feel happy and cheerful. Also, when you look into her rainbow eye you'll be cured of any disease or wound. Her skin is pale and pimple free(despite being the age that puberty hits), she has the body of a model and has even modelled for many fashion labels. She can make anything look nice on her, even a paper bag(heck, she's also a really good fashion designer). Special Powers: Her rainbow eye can heal anything by looking into them and when you look into the silvery eye you see visions. She is super strong and can lift the White House with her pinkie finger. She's got the power to transform into whatever she wants. With her silver eye she can time travel and alternate the past(Lol you didn't leik, know it, but leik, she even saved Anne Frank from being captured!1!!1). She can instantly tell if you're lying or not. She has telekinesis, mind reading power, can control all the elements(not just water, earth, air and fire)and she can make stuff appear by imagining it! She can also talk to spirits and animals. Weapon: She has this platinum ring with five alexandrites on it and these turn into a sword, a magic wand, a bow and arrows, a tank or a gun. Her pendant with a rare black diamond also gives her wings thus allowing her to fly and be the fastest being ever. Family: King Whatshisface is her father and Queen Aintnobodygottimeforthat is her mother and together they rule all the universes!!! Background: In her past life she was Princess Marielsue of all the universes before she was sent to the human world for her own protection. She's had many boyfriends and has several others who lust after her. Even in the human world, she still kept her powers and memories but then she had amnesia and forgot. Her foster parents are very mean to her and treated her like a slave and she gets bullied a lot at school but even so she remains cheerful and optimistic. And besides, everybody knows they hate her because they're jealous! .... Think I went a bit too far... Oh well. I had fun parodying all the Sues I've ever read about. On a different note, I've now got 394 posts!!! Potterheads will get it... |
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 27, 2013 18:28:28 GMT -5
Ok! Thank you for the posts! Now...round two starts. Basically you just write a short story (500 words or less) with your Mary Sue.
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Post by Misha on Jul 28, 2013 16:45:20 GMT -5
i wok up and looked in the mirror "ugh ma hair is disgusting" i cried as i stroked my perf blonde hair which was perfectly strait even in the mornings lol. i had slept at like 2am (rebel lololol) but had no bags under my eyes i put on a bit of lipstick on my already rose pink lips and put on a cute dress which showed off ma sexah legs i put on high heels even doe ma skl sais not to bc i don't need any rules im so cool. as i walked out da door i saw george by ma house. "OMFG george wat u doing here" i gasped sexually "im here to take u to school obvs" he spoke in a husky voice while wrappin his arm around ma waist. from da corner of me eyes i saw john loking upset maibi it was bc i was wiv george but i waved at him seductibly anyway cozz john is such a cutie. anyway when we got to school we got our grades back and i got A* for all da subjects even english even tho i write like a 2 year old lololol den out of nowhere in maths george jumped on my table and kissed me!!!!1!one! john saw and started fighting with george over me while all my friends told me how cute i looked in ma outfit den i remembered about ma past and how my "dad" abused me so john and george stopped fighting and both comfroted me i love them 2 babes so much
(I have never seen so much red wiggly lines in my life oh wow)
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 29, 2013 0:41:49 GMT -5
(lol i copied and pasted something from this forum once and I swear my spellcheck couldn't take it any longer)
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Post by Misha on Jul 29, 2013 11:38:18 GMT -5
(yeah I saw not surprised tbh)
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 29, 2013 13:47:52 GMT -5
(Lol I wonder is spellcheck exists for some people)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2013 1:49:31 GMT -5
wow finally someone cares about mary sues. Read some really horrible fanfiction that other day///
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Post by pinkycrystal on Jul 30, 2013 2:31:27 GMT -5
A lot of people care. Oh and, can I have the link to that fanfic, Bree? I dunno why but I kinda enjoy reading crapfics. I can give you links to some Ember and I have found. I don't know what lead to it, but I'm pretty sure it started with "hi my name is Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way"...
(that's the first line of the Harry Potter crapfic My Immortal, btw.)
Oh and, do you want to enter this contest? I'm sure Ember wouldn't mind. After all, who doesn't love mocking Suethors?
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