Random Writing

[Yingy]

That's I bit realistic I think.......but it's still weird and I like that

[heathertd]

I'm working on a new project, and I need feedback for this mini-prologue I've finished writing.

There's a sole reason for every bad thing that ever happened, if you really stop to think about it. That's the weird thing about reality, everything connects one way or another. Some links are so small, afternoon snacks, bus tickets, rings. But there are the bigger ones. Ones you never really saw, but thought you should have.

This is the story of twelve kids who caused those links. Connected everything that should and shouldn't have been connected. It's kind of a long story, really long. Bits of it won't make sense no matter how close you look and above all else, nobody quite knows where it really started. The story has no beginning – merely a point in time where the events were starting to shape from the perspective of one of those twelve kids.

[Misha]

I think it's really good, it reminds me of a story I read where 10 authors got together and wrote a chapter each about a different character but their story interlinks in the end.

[Petpet]

I really like the idea and I would love to read about it. The prologue definitely wanted to make me read it.

[Evelyn]

I like the way that it's phrased, and the way it sort of subtly introduces how it's going to be written. I would definitely read it after just reading the prologue here.