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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2013 3:47:26 GMT -5
Ok, so some of you might have heard of EJ12 (I don't red it much now I'm 13 so yeah but I read it a year or so ago and I think we could like make the characters older and make the stuff more exciting if that makes sense). Basically the thing is that you're a normal girl living your normal life, but with a twist - you're also working undercover for this soy agency called 'SHINE' who is against the 'bad' organization called 'SHADOW'. But the problem is that here the characters are like 11 or 12 year olds and I'd rather have slightly older characters. So basically, I invented a new workd lol. Anyway I'm calling it Renills (the town) and you come of age at 25 there and it's a lot more dangerous. In thi world you mature slower physically but similarly mentally, sorry, had to do that. Not that you'll be super smart or anything. Otherwise it would be kinda weird. But anyway you'd kind of look like a 12 or 13 yr old but mentally about a 16 or 17 year old. And that would be average blah blah blah. And you'd be 12 or 13 I hope you get it. So anyway you were recruited by SHINE for some reason (you choose a 'spy' skill that you think your character should have) and then you're sent in missions to stop certain things that SHADOW is doing but actually you're - well, I'll reveal more of the plot as the rp goes on. So anyway, rules. I think you know them but anyway... 1. Don't be a Mary Sue. I don't know about them much so please correct me but I know they're like perfect people and have bad pasts and families and stuff. 2. Make your character's skill really good, so then they can for a really good group and everything. 3. Let your character have a flaw 4. This is my first roleplay so go easy on me please. Sorry i sound pathetic but I just needed to let you buys know. 5. Let me do the quests and stuff but PM me when you need to. 6. Don't make your character ridiculously bad or ridiculously good. 7. Lol have fun! Ok, so those rules aren't that good, but I guess you should read some of the other roleplays. So part 1 is going to be basically a day at school, but then all SHINE agents have a special phone (choose your favorite colour for that) and then they also have a special charm bracelet with 4 different charms on it of your choice (but not like totally OP look at mine for examples) and usually a fifth during missions, anyway the entry tube to SHINE goes underground and it's basically done by tapping in a PIN code on the side of a toilet lol. And then you get in, and btw were going to be like a special circumstances team or something so we have to's tick together and stuff. Also, you have to have 1 pet - a dog or cat or something that can be shrunk into a charm. It's half magic, half plain technology. Enter in the entries thread!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 9, 2013 22:54:43 GMT -5
part 1 - finding out This part is basicaly where you go into the mission center place and you find that your first missions is to infiltrate one of shadow's factories and, ultimtely, stiop the production of the dangerous chemicals inside. the factory is in Antarctica and you will be given special equipment.
Ok, Imma roleplay! I strolled into the school. "Zoe!" Someone called. Probably one of my friends, but I walked by. I had better things to do than talk toaday. Suddenly, my bright pink SHINE phone's screen flashed, and a message saying 'report to mission center immediately' came up. I remembered that I was going to soon be part of a special group - about my age, all with amazing talents and skills. I couldn't wait, but I could tell that there was some kind of a mission ahed - and that it would be fnu. I ran to the toilet block and barricaded myself inside the one at the very edge. I flipped open the toilet roll holder and t7yped in my PIN nuber - 6-1-2-3. The toilet spun around and dropped me onto a fuchsa beanbag that swept me into the SHINE mission control center. "You're the first here." Dr. Shine herself said. "COngrats. The others should come soon."
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 10, 2013 0:01:11 GMT -5
I reached for my metallic blue SHINE phone as soon as I heard it beep and was greeted by a message from Dr. Shine of the special agency SHINE. I ran to the nearest toilet block, next to the science classrooms, glad that nobody else was there. I went into one of cubicals and flipped open the toilet roll holder for the secret key pad before typing in my own PIN- 5-5-0-8. The toilet spun around and I fell onto the beanbag that swept agents down into the SHINE mission control centre.
I greeted Dr. Shine and Zoe with a curt nod and waited for the others.
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Post by Misha on Aug 10, 2013 1:04:50 GMT -5
I heard my grey SHINE phone beep so I grabbed it out of my pocket, and read the message. Nodding a little I placed back my SHINE phone into my jeans and ran to the toilets. I sighed with relief as I saw no one was occupying the cubicle at the very end and jogged towards it. Closing the door I carefully opened the toilet roll holder to reveal a small key pad. I entered my PIN 2-6-8-1. The toilet spun around and I fell onto a fuchsia beanbag which swept me into the SHINE mission control centre.
Zoe and Lyra were already there so I waved shyly and stood beside them before greeting Dr. Shine with a simple hello.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 10, 2013 14:20:54 GMT -5
The noise was surprisingly loud in the quiet place that I was loitering, just outside the school. Of course, I should have remembered that there was that SHINE group that I'd been asked to join. I didn't expect the invitation, but I accepted it anyway. Working alone was nice, perhaps, but did I really expect myself to be doing that all the time? I pulled out the silver phone and read the message, smiling only a little. I still didn't know what it was like to be that excited, that happy. I rushed to the toilet cubicle, seeing that someone had just gone in. Probably another person from SHINE. Maybe they were even in my group. After they'd gone, the door unlocked itself and I flipped open the holder and typed in 5-1-0-5. My PIN code. As I arrived at the Mission Control Centre via the standard fuchsia beanbag, I gave a quick wave to everyone else there. Hopefully, no one would be skilled enough to see that I was faking this whole 'being nice' thing. Well, why shouldn't I?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2013 15:50:24 GMT -5
As soon as my phone beeped, I remembered the meting. I quickly tightened my ponytail and rushed into the toilet cubicle, flipped the holder open and typed in my PIN number - 2-3-4-6. A lot of people think its easy to crack, but I didn't think so. No one had tried, anyway. I gues it was one of those things that you'd only try to guess if you know about it, which most people in the school didnt. I was swept into the mission control center by the classic pink beanbag and gave a quirky wave to everyone already there. I hoped the mission would be fun. And it would involve water. For some reason, I just loved to be in water. "Hey, when's everyone else coming?" I asked.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2013 2:03:56 GMT -5
I walked along the path into the school, feeling people's stares on me. I don't know why, maybe they weren't but I felt it. Suddenly, out of the blue, my green SHINE phone beeped. To them I was reliable, and actually liked, and I had been invited to join a group of the agency's 'finest agents' my age. I crept into the toilet cubicle, shutting the door behind me, half slamming it. I tapped in my PIN code: 7-9-2-0. I was swept into the mission control center just as another girl who was already there asked "Hey, when's everyone else coming?" Well, I was the last person. Late, again. "I'm here now. What's our mission today?" I tried to keep my tone light but I don't think it worked.
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 14, 2013 14:46:09 GMT -5
(So now that everybody has arrived, what happens next?)
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Post by Deleted on Aug 15, 2013 2:41:35 GMT -5
(um, i'll do Dr. Shine's speech abut the mission, p.s. I changed it a bit so listen up!) "Welcome to SHINE HQ. You'll know each other, I hope?" I pointed to Lyra and Evie (u guys are like the smart characters I think right? idk tell me!). "I knwo them from like them winning prizes and stuff. But I don't know you." I piointed at the other girls. "Well, first, I'll tell you the mission. You'll have oplenty of time to talk on the plane." "So, SHADOW has recruited someone smart: Adelina Frost. She's the genius of SHADOW, and she's been trying to make money: that's all she wants, money. She's started destroying ice for water, which she expects to be the new gold. Your mssion: stop her."
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Post by Misha on Aug 15, 2013 10:42:35 GMT -5
Dr. Shine began speaking so we all stopped and listened. "Welcome to SHINE HQ. You all know each other I hope?" "A bit" I spoke quietly. Dr. Shine nodded before continuing. "Well first I'll tell you the mission. You'll have plenty of time to talk on the plane. So, SHADOW has recruited someone smart: Adelina Frost. She's the genius of SHADOW and she's been trying to make money. That's all she wants, money. She's destroying ice for water, which she expects to be the new gold. Your mission: Stop her" I nodded once to show I had understood everything and waited for further instructions.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 16, 2013 13:56:37 GMT -5
(I don't think you'll mind if I skip the speech and just do my reaction) I nodded too, probably ending up to look sort of shy, a little insecure. Perfect. "So we're going pretty soon then, I'd say? Or, do you maybe have more fantastic equipment to give us?" My tone of voice was way too sweet for me. Anyone that knew me wouldn't associate a voice like that with me. (Alright, so Trixie, you're doing all of Dr. Shine's parts, correct?)
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 16, 2013 15:27:54 GMT -5
I nod to show that I understand but nobody notices. "So we're going pretty soon then, I'd say? Or do you maybe have more fantastic equipment to give us?" Strange, I don't ever recall Evie using that tone of voice. Not since I met her those weeks ago when we all first joined, that is. Anybody who met her would get the uneasy feeling that she is not to be trusted. I await further instructions from Dr Shine.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2013 12:10:31 GMT -5
I didn't know anyone well and I still felt a bit shy and like I was the only one that wasn't super special. I nodded, a little afraid to say anything just yet. I waited for Dr. shine to continue, or at least I hoped she would. I really liked the SHINE equipment and fiddled around with the four charms on my bracelet.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2013 12:43:46 GMT -5
(I joined thanks Trixie) I tapped in my code at the toilets: 3-9-7-8 and rushed into SHINE HQ. "Who's this?" Dr. shine asked. "Oh, Fiona, of course. Well, meet your team and just quickly introduce yourselves while I get the equipment here.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2013 16:02:00 GMT -5
"Here's your new equipment" dr. Shine said, pointing aat racks of special oats and outfits. She said "try them on! Have fun, ill be back!" I slipped into a cubicle to change into the hot pink outfit I'd selected, trimmed with white fur. It wasn't the best camouflage, but that wasn't my field of speciality. I tried it on - and I still looked fantastic despite the fact that it was a mission. I went outside first and Dr. shine gave me the charm. And was I surprised. "Now, Zoe, I know you get seasick easily, this boat charm will stop that when you're on the SHINEMOBILE." I was so happy - shine even invented a charm that did that?! I was just about to give it a twist when Dr. Shine showed me the next piece of equipment." These are special SHINE shoes. Choose one style. I chose the one that could transform into skis. That was going to be fun. And, of course, the weapon we had to take, in case we needed to attack. I grabbed the light ray - it would blind the enemy, they wouldn't di eso then SHINE could still question them. Was fully decked out and I got to the underground train station at shine and settled into the private compartment that we had, flicking through my SHINE phone, playing a game based on the arctic while I waited for everyone else to come. I was agent ZD97, nothing could stop me.
(Yeah u need your initials and a number that's your ID)
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