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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 24, 2013 3:57:08 GMT -5
It's a bit overdone but it all depends on how you portray it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2013 15:13:54 GMT -5
Yeah but elements and control are really AWESOME it sounds gud you know?,
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2013 15:16:35 GMT -5
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 24, 2013 17:18:51 GMT -5
She could use some more flaws, Trixie...
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 24, 2013 17:22:59 GMT -5
First of all, what's the character for? If it's for a fantasy role play, it should be alright but you need more flaws and less skills. And consider running your character through this test www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm |
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 24, 2013 17:24:43 GMT -5
Use the test, it's pretty accurate.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 4:00:49 GMT -5
I rand through my worst character and I got 78. Pretty bad indedd.
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 25, 2013 5:09:53 GMT -5
I've run some old characters in the test and I got around 50(they were for short stories so I didn't think up really elaborate histories or personalities for them). Ember and I also ran Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way through the test and got ninety something...in the first few categories.
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 25, 2013 13:33:46 GMT -5
I did Silky, and I sort of gave up at the beginning.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2013 23:30:29 GMT -5
I like the name Lynette I think it's good for a smart and serious person...what do you guys think? I'm writing this story (won't post, sorry) and that's the name of one of the cabarcters.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2013 23:31:12 GMT -5
And btw I once did a character from a story one my younger sister whose name is Ruby and her character got like.a 74 or something,..
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2013 13:12:40 GMT -5
OMG I tested Pinky's Mary Sue and liek after the first 1 I just gave up so ur ms was rly gr8!!!!
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Post by pinkycrystal on Aug 27, 2013 14:30:59 GMT -5
Huh? You mean the one for the contest?
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Post by Evelyn on Aug 27, 2013 15:15:53 GMT -5
I suppose so...
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Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2013 15:01:26 GMT -5
Hey I made a character for a story, her name is Lorraine Hayley, what do you think of the name? She has somewhat long brown hair, blue eyes, light skin, is a but shy and insecure, easily peer pressured but actually innovative and inventive. What do you think?
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