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Post by Misha on Sept 5, 2013 3:03:10 GMT -5
Excuse me Laura but How? If you read our posts we say countless times we're not trying to be mean. So please explain since you're being rather vague.
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Post by Petpet on Sept 5, 2013 19:31:11 GMT -5
In my opinion, Sue/Stu are the worst.
Why? Very simple. They aren't interesting.
No one wants to read a story where the person is so perfect that the only troubles they have are external problems. People like to hear stories of troubles and how they overcome them. Even the greatest stories ever told have the greatest flaws. Odysseus, was a man with great intellect and strength. One of his greatest flaws was curiosity... which lead him into more trouble than he needed.
One of my favorite flaws in characters is being too stubborn. (Like a few people I've met in my life.) They have been so stubborn that they just end up being hated by everyone... but of course, they don't notice it until it's too late.
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I actually like receiving feedback (even in the form of criticism.) It allows me to evaluate and see what I can improve on. I always have a hard time with writing and criticism is the best way for me to learn and improve. I hate always receiving positive feedback only.
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Post by Evelyn on Sept 5, 2013 22:26:39 GMT -5
Laura, if you quit, I don't think any of us care.
Not to be insulting, of course...
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2013 12:33:17 GMT -5
Yeah and by the way if you quit then,,,,well, Laura just read the pm I sent.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2013 14:20:32 GMT -5
Whatever u guys do I'm staying 4 the roleplaying cuz I like roleplaying btw Laura told me today thats she might quit
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Post by Evelyn on Sept 7, 2013 1:07:09 GMT -5
Alright, so getting back on topic...I'm writing this other story, and I've got four character names. Which ones do you like/dislike?
Caterina Dahmer
Faye Aldaines
Julian Lockwood
Avander Blake
I haven't planned each character yet, I might post descriptions, etc., when I do.
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Post by Misha on Sept 7, 2013 6:59:16 GMT -5
I think they're all quite good to be honest
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Post by Petpet on Sept 7, 2013 16:51:01 GMT -5
@evelyn: They are very unique names. Like Misha said, they are all good. For some reason, Faye Aldaines and Julian Lockwood seem to "pop" to me.
@trixie: What exactly is your definition of stupid? Because I assure you, I could find a definition and examples to counter.
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Post by Evelyn on Sept 7, 2013 16:53:52 GMT -5
Thanks. And I repeat your message to Trixie.
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Post by pinkycrystal on Sept 7, 2013 16:59:36 GMT -5
The real definition of stupid from the dictionary.  |
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Post by Misha on Sept 7, 2013 17:07:22 GMT -5
Why is it in slang all words which were first created to be bad e.g. Stupid, Wicked, Sick mean things like Amazing and terrific.
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Post by pinkycrystal on Sept 7, 2013 17:08:45 GMT -5
Don't ask. English is starting to get a bit messed up.
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Post by pinkycrystal on Sept 7, 2013 23:10:47 GMT -5
Was that meant to be a comeback?
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Post by Evelyn on Sept 7, 2013 23:45:07 GMT -5
I think it was. However, Trixie, I am sorry to inform you of the fact that...
You have failed.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 8, 2013 2:08:21 GMT -5
Wowwwww..........the definition for stupid.........
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