Is your character a Mary Sue?

[Misha]

I think it's ok, Lorraine is fine, looks are not too bad, and the flaws are good, since they are flaws people generally have. I think she's fine but for safe measures there's no harm in using the test, from my eyes she's fine but it's never a bad thing to double check if you get what I mean.

[Evelyn]

Lorraine (Lora? Raine? Does she have any nicknames?) is quite a nice name, a little unusual, but nicely so. She sounds like a fairly 'normal' character that could be hiding something.

[pinkycrystal]

Lorraine is a good character. She has got flaws and she seems balanced.

[Deleted]

But she's not like special like not super pretty or has a great ability! WTF Olivia!

[Evelyn]

That...is...the...point.

[Deleted]

But I don't get it CHARACTERS AND OCs are SUPPOSED TO B SPECIAL,

[pinkycrystal]

Did you even read what we've written on the other thread?!

[Evelyn]

Well, if you didn't, here's a REALLY good suggestion: read it.

[Deleted]

What about this character: she s princess that got kidnapped by pirates, she looks like:
www.fashionfemale.net/short-hairstyles-with-bangs-for-tomboy-girl.html/short-hairstyles-with-bangs-2013
And she doesn't know she's princess since she was orphaned and had bad foster families etc. she's nice and obedient but sometime TOO obedient she can manipulate water

[Evelyn]

Out of curiosity, what is her name going to be?

[pinkycrystal]

Alright, that's a good start.

[Deleted]

Yvonne Yasmine Yunie Yates (people call her Y for short for obvious reasons! It's like a joke and she has heaps of names but that doesn't make her a sue its just sort of unique)

[Evelyn]

I am not sure as to what I should be thinking right now...

[pinkycrystal]

Run her thought this test.

www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm

And this

www.katfeete.net/writing/marysue.html

And this

www.unc.edu/~jemarti/marysuetest/

Tell us what you get.

[Deleted]

On that day she will be wearing this:
buscut.blogspot.co.nz/2010/01/banana-republic-look.html
So cute and pretty!!! Right?